[US] Aiden 'Soul' McLain lore

[Aiden 'Soul' McLain]

Hello! Below is the Google Doc for my characters lore, I will be heavily involved in the ongoing SCP-610 storyline and have already spoke to the lead of the storyline and Site Inspection about my involvement, I'm now just here to make it official! I hope you guys like it, I worked really hard on it so critique is much appreciated, and also sorry if it seems 'boring' I'm a traditional SCP writer. And to anyone reading my bio, thank you for taking the time to read it! It means so much to me that I'm able to be involved in such an amazing community.

Personnel File Aiden McLain

— WARNING — THIS DOCUMENT IS CLASSIFIED UNAUTHORIZED ACCESS WILL RESULT IN IMMEDIATE DEATH VIA THE BERRYMAN-LANGFORD MEMETIC KILL AGENT YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED DEPLOYING KILL AGENT… KILL AGENT ACTIVE VITAL SIGNS CONFIRMED WELCOME, ████████ OPEN PERSONNEL FILE…

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[Harold Hawks]

I briefly went over SCP 610 on the SCP wiki for this, here are some of my thoughts.

I like the premise from your OOC explanation, though you should include a few things in-line with the lore from the SCP wiki.

Firstly you should mention that your character would have been contained and monitored for infection since he was in such close proximity. There is no doubt they would consider that a priority alongside containing the original infected mass.

Second, keep very well in mind that the SCP Foundation maintains a "scorched earth policy" for containment of SCP-610. Not to say that O5 Command wouldn't do something as irresponsible as moving it around to different sites for testing purposes anyways, but I'd expect they'd leave the vial with E-11 at minimum rather than ISD.

Those are both minor details of course and frankly there are no glaring issues in your lore request besides the fact that you should be made very well aware that making light of this information to parties that are uninitiated, such as a janitor for whatever reason, may cost you your career and your life. I think it would be good to include a small briefing on that for your character before entering Site-65 which is host to all manner of special clearances for various different items and creatures. You can also just say "Aiden was briefed to be cautious of who he shares his information with..." etc.

Other than those three things, it's a perfectly fine document. I wish you the best of luck and hopefully it gets resolved soon, preferably before Christmas. wink wink.

 

[Luciferluxu]

Request Denied​

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We have decided to deny your request due to the following reasons:
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• We believe that due to your character being amnesticated, staff are unwilling at this point to authorise lore that would give him extra knowledge.
  You may reapply the lore but it needs to match to some level what happend in-character​

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