SCP-RP (USA) - GM Application - Rockriley333

[RockRiley333]

WOMP WOMP WOMPPPPPPPPPPP

 

[Dr Random K.]

1. Please review your app and make sure to fix punctuation/capitalisation/grammar issues, this would help a lot with readability
2. Both your O-1 and A-1 ideas don’t necessarily seem like something that would need GM involvement, maybe try to look into those some more
3. For your GOC mission you dont really explain anything and keep repeating parts of sentences?
4. Your last mission doesn’t really explain how this person could be distinguishable at all, way too vague
5. Your general event idea for CI is way too vague / does not really explain the premise of the event

For now, I will -support this app

 

[Recker]

The events could be better like Random said, but this app is also plagued with grammatical errors making it extremely hard to read. The formatting could also use some improvement. I would've also included more detail on why you want to become a GM and how you will help the server.

-Support

 

[RockRiley333]

I fixed as many of the grammar errors as I could...

 

[RockRiley333]

The events could be better like Random said, but this app is also plagued with grammatical errors making it extremely hard to read. The formatting could also use some improvement. I would've also included more detail on why you want to become a GM and how you will help the server.

-Support

I understand and I will fix the grammer...

 

[RockRiley333]

1. Please review your app and make sure to fix punctuation/capitalisation/grammar issues, this would help a lot with readability
2. Both your O-1 and A-1 ideas don’t necessarily seem like something that would need GM involvement, maybe try to look into those some more
3. For your GOC mission you dont really explain anything and keep repeating parts of sentences?
4. Your last mission doesn’t really explain how this person could be distinguishable at all, way too vague
5. Your general event idea for CI is way too vague / does not really explain the premise of the event

For now, I will -support this app

I understand I will fix the grammar

 

[Ranger0314]

+ support

When I first met you your biggest goal was to be a GM and though that was months ago you still have that as your biggest goal

 

[PolarBear]

Application Denied​

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Hello, @RockRiley333

Thank you for taking time to make an application, What the Event Team Leads have decided was to give you more time on the server before we accept your application, so staff and other GMs can get more interactions with you! We hope to continue to see you on the server and can't wait to see your application again

You may reapply in 2 weeks!

Regards, @PolarBear ​

 

[RockRiley333]

Application Denied​

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Hello, @RockRiley333

Thank you for taking time to make an application, What the Event Team Leads have decided was to give you more time on the server before we accept your application, so staff and other GMs can get more interactions with you! We hope to continue to see you on the server and can't wait to see your application again

You may reapply in 2 weeks!

Regards, @PolarBear ​

I have been playing this server for 2 years total at one point I had a 30 total day V count BUT I took a long break setting it back to 1D. but I fully understand that I need to take the time to meet the new staff team members. Thank you for reviewing my application and I hope to see you in game as well